Much better than anything by Knox
That was a very nice animation. I really liked the detail and the human interaction. Two things that would have made it better:
1.) A little disco set for him would have been nice.
2.) Don't ever use image quality as an excuse for not being able to see something. You could have been innovative enough to put a close up on the paper when the hand was done writing on it!
Other than that, keep up the good work.